Fascinating subject and one that’s well represented across science fiction.
One of the slides had a ton of text, which took away a little from the other ones, which had great visuals. A little abrupt an ending; might benefit from a proper conclusion.
I feel like its a-little too focused on explaining the concept of multi-verses than actually getting to the research that you found or how these multiverses effect something else. I feel like there needs to be a stronger question because I feel like you’re only summarizing.
Khoury, I like that you explained the key terms (such as multiverse theory and parallel universe), but you should do some additional work helping to show how and why all these details fit together in the service of some larger argument/claim (the “so what?”). Don’t get too bogged down in the details that you forget to emphasize the big picture.
Also, remember that you need attribution and citations throughout, as you integration your research.
I would like picture for the examples.
Good amount of text.
Fascinating subject and one that’s well represented across science fiction.
One of the slides had a ton of text, which took away a little from the other ones, which had great visuals. A little abrupt an ending; might benefit from a proper conclusion.
1). Well detail slides, good choice of pictures
2). little too much words, and very blue
1. Great Explanation of Endgame and how it relates to the time travel theory.
2. Talk a little slower to help people understand the confusing parts.
Liked the information you talked about when mentioned Parallel Universes.
Would like more information from your other sources
Covered the topic and what it is about really well.
More information on why this matters
Should have better examples for the first sub topic, and better pictures for the second sub topic.
1) Good explanations and slides.
2) However some are a bit too wordy and some are not necessary.
I feel like its a-little too focused on explaining the concept of multi-verses than actually getting to the research that you found or how these multiverses effect something else. I feel like there needs to be a stronger question because I feel like you’re only summarizing.
Khoury, I like that you explained the key terms (such as multiverse theory and parallel universe), but you should do some additional work helping to show how and why all these details fit together in the service of some larger argument/claim (the “so what?”). Don’t get too bogged down in the details that you forget to emphasize the big picture.
Also, remember that you need attribution and citations throughout, as you integration your research.
the concept of the multiverse and branching timeline s is a fascinating topic that leads to a lot of confusing factors