Professor Belli–Fall 2020–City Tech
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Great topic and a really important one, too.
Maybe use less text on the slides; I find myself reading them instead of listening to the presentation and focusing on the visuals.
1. Too many words on Slides
2. Love the topic and argument/examples
Simplify the definition/text, but good design
Too many words
Good examples
Enjoy the fact that you are focusing on a different side of history..
Would like to see more references to these Indigenous Sci-Fi stories.
A lot of information on the topic showing that you studied and have knowledge on it, however you have to much information for this presentation. on the 6-8 minute one it would be fine.
too many slides and it started to feel like your going off in tangents
1) Great topic with good examples.
2) A little too wordy on the slides, could reduce it a little bit.
2). Less words on screen, and more off page information.
1). Speak faster and quick
A well-detailed overview of the topic.
Maybe reduce the amount of text on a slide and make it a little larger.
2). Less words on screen, and more off page information.
1). Speak faster and quick
Such a fascinating, timely, & important topic Oscar!
I like that you started by framing the issue with the main genre and then the sub-genre. In general, I would encourage you to use less text on slides (so you’re not just reading them), though you can put the quotes you’re reading up there (to help us to follow your discussion).. Don’t forget citations as well, so we know where you are getting your research from.
The pacing was pretty slow and I felt like you definitely need more energy in your speaking. I liked the topic I did a similar ones for the annotations comparing the Na’vi tribe from Avatar to the way native Americans are treated in modern society.