Aaron Hollander_Project 2 – Revised Final

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  1. Comments:
    Your concept is very strong in the massing – the corrugated planes intersecting, but it is not seen at any other level – furniture layout, floor plans, ceilings, lights…

    Floor plans – the flow works, but it would be more successful if the angled planes showed throughout the plans. The tables and seating are very generic – not related to the concept. Were they meatballs??? weak link

    Building sections are exciting, but that is because of the angled planes – beside that there is nothing else continuing through to the design. Everything is light and hard to read.
    Elevations – the long elevation is great, but the front needs work/studies. It appears short and wide – not dynamic with the angled plans. there could be planes that come up from the ground to create the entrance. The entrance should be celebrated with your concept.
    RCP- The lights do not look like that belong to the intertwined mixed up bowl of pasta. They are all in the same family – industrial, metal – but is there something that could have happened at the ceiling plane to repeat at a different scale your concept?
    Hope these comments help strengthen your project.

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