Good work. What do you mean by “huge spin” in your response to the facade? Try to avoid slang in your writing since it will exclude those readers that don’t know the meaning of slang words. Your responds to “Cruel Reality” is excellent. I didn’t understand how the elevator/stairs arrangement was an example of a courageous conversation, but your observation about the wide spaces is right on point. Finally, when you make a claim like “it was well organized” you need to explain how, because it seemed like you contradicted this point by saying “a lot was going on.” This answer wasn’t very clear.
Good work. What do you mean by “huge spin” in your response to the facade? Try to avoid slang in your writing since it will exclude those readers that don’t know the meaning of slang words. Your responds to “Cruel Reality” is excellent. I didn’t understand how the elevator/stairs arrangement was an example of a courageous conversation, but your observation about the wide spaces is right on point. Finally, when you make a claim like “it was well organized” you need to explain how, because it seemed like you contradicted this point by saying “a lot was going on.” This answer wasn’t very clear.