16 thoughts on “Feedback for Raihan”

  1. I was able to understand what you were saying within your essay and how your educational experience of learning English has shaped you to be who you are today.The only thing I would work on in this essay is your sentence structuring and a few grammar corrections.This will make the essay sound and flow a lot better.

  2. It was nice to get a insight into your pass. See the struggles you faced and overcome to get to where you want to be. Your essay just needed better sentence stricture. And a bit more work on it grammar. Continue moving forward.

  3. It was nice to get a insight into your pass. See the struggles you faced and overcome to get to where you want to be. Your essay just needed better sentence stricture. And a bit more work on it grammar. Continue moving forward.

  4. I really loved you story, it was nice to see how you overcame something that was holding you back. If I were to fix something it would be minor grammar mistakes. your essay was great.

  5. Not sure 100% if I know what essay this is, (I forgot to take a picture, and I can’t find it on gmail) but if this is the essay about a language barrier then I think there were some grammatical mistakes but I liked it and the message. But if I’m referring to the wrong essay then sorry, ignore this.

  6. Your essay was very good, in a way I was able to connect with your story. I understand your essay and where you learned from this experience. There are some mistakes like grammar that could be fixed.

  7. Great essay. Those are great skills especially knowing about cars. I will say putting more time into the grammar and having a better sentence structure is what will help make the essay stand out.

  8. your essay was great and inspiring. Language barriers are really hard and a lot of people dealt with it, including myself. I am glad you overcame it though. watch out for the minor grammatical errors and sentence structures.

  9. It was nice of you to open up about your past thank you for sharing. Maybe you could reword some of the sentences so it could flow better.

  10. Your essay was something that a few people can actually understand so thank you for sharing, language is a hard thing that gets in the way of situations with a lot of obstacles, you sharing this story helps us see what kind of person you are and what has shaped you in what you are today. Practice more on grammar because your essay was good

     

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