For the visual quote project the ones that I chose to revise were these two drawings:
- On the first artwork, what I revised was the quote. I left the word “world” the same font but decreased the type size. For the rest of the quotes I changed the font type to san serif and lowercased the “I”. I also added the name of the person who said the quote which I forgot to add in my other quote drawings. With the feet, I just spread it a little far apart so it wouldn’t be too close to the quote.
- For the second artwork, I kept the fonts the same for the quote but lowercased “there’s”. With “at your” I decreased the font size and put it on the elf. I left the feet drawing, and took out the word foot. I did this because since I have the image of it, I wanted the viewer to look at the quote and try to figure out what it’s trying to say.