Exploratory Paper

Police brutality according to Thelawdictionary

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3 Responses to Exploratory Paper

  1. Abigale says:

    This was a decent attempt at writing an exploratory paper, however I felt like a lot of information was left out. There were also some inconsistencies (font, style, etc.) and grammatical/punctuation errors throughout. I hope I don’t sound too harsh, but perhaps revising after writing the paper would help out a lot. 馃檪

  2. Since you wrote about police brutality and racial profiling, have you ever experienced any situations you wrote about? If so, it would have been nice to mention it in your paper. Also the part in your paper where you discuss “Being a homosexual”, I feel like you could have been more specific on whether you were speaking about lesbians, gay men or transgender people. There was no problem mentioning the study done over seas, but it would have been nice to just focus on the LGBT community in America in my opinion.

  3. I like the issues you chose to explore because I wrote an essay on racial profiling last semester. You are completely right these are major issues in our community today. I believe that you should consider the original assignment as far as font and other grammatical issues. Also I think you should have cited the titles of the articles you used in the essay.

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